Revise intro wording.
authorJim Hague <jim.hague@acm.org>
Wed, 19 Feb 2020 14:22:39 +0000
changeset 1039 1bb882b1b6ad
parent 1038 ee9efd99260a
child 1040 e6587dc18509
Revise intro wording.
Beginners/intro.md
--- a/Beginners/intro.md	Wed Feb 19 14:22:14 2020 +0000
+++ b/Beginners/intro.md	Wed Feb 19 14:22:39 2020 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-This page lists the tunes selected for the monthly Oxford Beginners session.
+These are tunes chosen for the monthly Oxford Beginners session.
 
 The Oxford Beginners session is an opportunity for all inexperienced
 musicians to gather and play together. The tunes, all popular in the
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 a go at. They don't require a fast tempo, and the range of notes is limited.
 But they're still real tunes, as played at other sessions.
 
-The first tunes in the list are those we think are especially easy.
+The first tunes listed are those we think are especially easy.
 Start with those!
 
 The tunes are drawn mostly from the Cry Havoc session repertoire.